re: entry # 5:I really like your design! I like the way you incorporated kids into the design and wonder if you could change the left one, perhaps he can be doing karate, since that's one of the programs I will offer. I will also offer zumba, yoga, hip hop, kids cooking and athletic conditioning for kids. I want to encourage boys, so having two male figures is good. I like the font you chose, but wonder if it should be a bit bigger, as well as the line underneath. Looking forward to your revisions...thanks!.
I might of gone overboard on all the kids but they were so much fun to draw! 4 boys and 2 girls doing after school activities ..Looking forward to further feedback...Thanks so much Peg
I like it! We have decided to incorporate, so my business name is now, "Moves After School, Inc." Can you change that? Thanks! Also maybe show me a revision with all black lettering, just for comparison...the kids look great!
I like # 7 the most, as it stands now. #8 is a close 2nd....can you just put a comma after school? (Moves After School, Inc.) When adding revisions, can you show me a darker colored circle for the background for comparison? They look great!
Hi, You're gonna think I'm crazy, but after getting some outside opinions, I do like the newly ranked #1. Please show me this with the cooking kid, jump rope kid and karate kid only. Also, add ", Inc", I prefer the font in # 1, but need it to be bolder. If you can't do that, go with the font in #2,
Could you also show me it with and without a blue background? For another option, show me the kid kicking the ball, cooking kid and karate kid to see if that works. Thanks again!
Oh ya, I like the original kids better than the revised ones.....cuter hair!
My eyes still gravitate towards this one...can you show me the same font as in #13? Maybe it's the height of the jumprope that "rounds it out". Thanks for your patience!