Thanks, I like the detail in your people in entry #8. How about the people embracing with one a nurse, the nurse's hands reaching out and on the back of patients upper arms looking patient in the eyes, or something like that. One of the people a nurse, but patient no in bed or even looking ill. The nurse could be walking hand-in-hand with patient on a winding pathway with trees along the path as another example.
I've came up with a tag line "Where love and care come together" if want to add something like that. It may even be better to add "medical" in the tag line such as "Where love and medical care come together"
What about one like #26 except people bigger, company name and tag line under it all, and then tree and/or stream could stay to left of people, etc.??? Just trying to get larger people (smiles) by moving things around to see how that looks.
Sorry for the late response due to time difference. Please check my following revisions #35, #36, #37 with the new tag line.
In all versions I've enlarged the main illustration to look more prominent and in #35, #36 I added more color. In case you want to use just two colors (in order to reduce printing cost) I made #37 version. Also I thought of replacing letter "O" with a heart, it gives a clever touch to logo.
I am at your disposal for any further modifications.
Thanks, Don't pay attention to the rankings until right at the last day or so. I really do see 3 designers that are actually a toss up and a 4th not far behind.
What about #35 using a heart like at the end of the "swoosh" on it as the "O" of TOUCH. It seems the heart doing that on #36 is too "heavy". There is also not a thing wrong with the "yellows" on #35 and #36, but I wonder if any better color(s)?
That's OK with ranking but I must admit that a good ranking is a nice boost of confidence! ;) Please check my new #47, #52. I added the tag-line "Medical Care with Love and Compassion", do you like it better?
Oh not sure why, but, the Texas Orange on the patient just doesn't get me, but I've not talked to anyone else here about that. Only other thing can think of on direction of, say, #35 and #52 is to round off patients forehead a little vs. "slopping" and maybe make her nose a little less pointed; more "cute"?
Ok got to get out of here for some hours. Good luck and have a good evening. Guess it will be your morning before we can be in comm's next.
Good morning (here). All on #59 please try making the "O" in "Touch" a heart. Not one any heavier than the O that's already there and/or putting a solid colored or filled in one there too. Then remove the heart from the end of the "swoosh". What about a shade of blue for swoosh on #59? By the way if you want to tell me what the swoosh should really be called, I'll call it that from now on.
Oh, and maybe we should add the word "Medical" before "Care" in the tag line. Please also feel free to suggest better tag line. Shoot, I'm the one that came up with the current one everyone's using?
Well if you ask for my opinion... The most important thing is your target group, what I mean is a logo like #59 will look more appealing to elder people and their families (basically their relatives are your target group) because of the illustration and the colors, it tells a story if that makes any sense. On the other hand #37 from artistic view is more "right", plain lines, to the point, few colors. Did I help you or I confused you? ;)
Anyhow I'll make the adjustments you mentioned and we'll talk again. Thanks!
Please check #60, #61 variations, I think I've applied all adjustments... Regarding tag-line I'll try to find some but your english are way better than mine and I'm afraid that I'll make text mistakes!
Hey! You're #1 even though SNGraphics is right there to me. I also like #43, but maybe it's a little "busy". I'm glad my English is better. However, yours is pretty darn good!
You do know it's "English is way better" vs. "english are way better"? In case you don't know that, are is for more than one such as "there are some good logos". Use is when talking about one item such as "#60 is the best logo". So, since there's only one English language, my "English is better" than yours, but not by much :)
Okay some thoughts (please don't judge me!). I think a key word is "Feel" because it's relating with Mother's Touch. So... a) Feel the Quality in Medical Care b) Feel the Trust in Medical Care c) Feel the Difference in Medical Care
Well, good thoughts on feel, but think I'll stay with touch. Over here touching is softer/warmer I think as in that gift touched me. It can be almost like or like love. Feel is used that way too, but used so much to talk about physically touching something that it's not quit as soft as in "I'm feeling my way around in the dark". But, good try and thoughts.
I would like to figure out how to get Quality, Trust, and/or we provide care with a Difference, I just don't know how to fit it all in.
Please try #60 with tag Where Caring and Medical Care come together since "Love" may be a bit too personal?
The only things I can think of are to try showing less of the ladies on #64 (may have to put Grandma's arm around nurse to make that look right?) or moving the people down a little, making that part them that would be under the words Mother's Touch opaque? I don't know if it can be improved any, but trying to think of some ways to deemphasize the ladies just a little to see if looks better. Maybe just try making both of them smaller? What do you think? By the way I may end the contest early is why getting kind of "picky" this early.
Also please change Love to Care in tag line of #63.
Here are my revised logos: #79 - I've reduced the size of people and adjusted the tag-line. I didn't placed them under the letters because it would look rather complex and their hands would be hidden.
#80 - New pose according to your comments, in which they're hugging each other. Hmmm... it's an option but, with all the respect, they look like they're in love. I think I prefer the other pose, it looks more natural, a weak lady that tenderly supported by a nurse. Anyway it's your call.
Good Morning/Afternoon! Thanks again for submissions and agree with comments & changes. Do you like the size of people in #79 or #64?
What all files will you send if win the contest? I've had people send me only a small, medium, and large *.jpg, others send those plus *.eps, *.eps, *.pdf, etc. with colored logos, black line, etc.
Good Morning/Afternoon! Thanks again for submissions and agree with comments & changes. Do you like the size of people in #79 or #64?
What all files will you send if win the contest? I've had people send me only a small, medium, and large *.jpg, others send those plus *.eps, *.eps, *.pdf, etc. with colored logos, black line, etc.
Hello! Personally I prefer #79, it looks more balanced. In case I win the contest the first step is to send you via LogoTournament the eps & jpg files of the winning design.
After that step I can send you directly at your personal email (which I'll find at the Legal Contract) all the additional files of the logo in: ai, pdf, png, tiff, pdf formats. Also I could make the B/W version of the winning logo to send it as well.
I agree #79 looks more balanced. Now you didn't just say that because I put it first did you :) I'm wondering if we should later do something on the tag line like darken it? It seems a little bashful doesn't it?
Believe me at don't take anything for granted! It ain't over till it's over... that's what they say? Sure we can make adjustments to tag line at any time.
Yip. That's what they say. People from the state of Missouri are said to be from the "Show Me" state. Of course that means they will believe something when they see it and not before that. Over here some also say a "deal's not done" or "it's not over" until the money's in the bank.
I welcome any ideas or thoughts you have on the tag line.
At this point I'm going to show my top 5 logos to my marketing team about 2pm, Monday just to make sure I'm not missing something instead of ending the tournament early. I will, therefore, end the tournament before 5p Monday unless I just can't get to a computer. I'm also not ending it early just in case someone submits one that blows me away between now and contest close time. As we know, however, I really like yours, you've worked hard and been great to work with, and I don't see that happening.
It's nice to learn these new expressions, thanks! I had a client from Texas a while ago and he told me some expressions like "you nailed it" or "it looks cheesy" that at first sounded so weird but now they sound pretty natural.
I'll try to work on tag-line and we'll be in touch. Thanks!