Most Precision MotionLogo Design Contest

My apologies for the tagline error here's the revised and adjusted space with the MPM #190 - #191 - #192. Thanks!

Hi Crimson, we like #185 the best.

Here is our specific final feedback:

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1. "Superior Screw Balls" must be corrected to "Superior Ball Screws"

2. The "MOST PRECISION MOTION" letters need to be a little narrower increasing the space between each other. The layout, spacing, positioning, etc.. are perfect so we do not anything to change when addressing the text.

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Thank you

So far this is what I think most balance with the #186 variation the M with the "most" and "motion" is aligned with the "most" as the center of the circle. Also the screw ball graphic cannot be smaller or larger it makes the overall logo unproportioned in my opinion but refer to this as your adjustments takes to the next updates. Thanks! let me know if you have further comments.

The last tweak is not balance for the font last revision I have instead adjusted the font to make the logo intact let me know if this is ok also.

Also, great work so far! We like all that you are doing!

Hi Crimson. Thank you for that last round of tweaks. What we found is that none of them preserved the circle-format. We like where you are headed it, but need to see exactly what you just did with those variations, but in circle format instead of the Oval type idea you came up with.

Here is the specific feedback:

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1. Please redo logo submissions #165 - #174 (10 submissions) and make the arcs a circle and not an oval similar to the arcs in #162

2. Please make the tagline SUPERIOR BALL SCREWS darker gray to match the word PRECISION. Is one bold and one not? This wording is hard to see clearly.

3. Please make 1 additional color combination example to take the bottom arc purple in #167 and use this with the bottom arc in #172 to see this in addition to the other 10 examples you will be providing

4. If you need to shrink the ball screw a bit to help with making the arc round and proportional please do so.

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I'll be out in a few hours thank you for continued support just leave your comments here I'll check it right away as soon as I get back home. Thanks again!

30% height and 40% width reduction centered the 3 fonts together variants as follows with the lower entries.

I meant the height only for this one...

just the 30% width overall centered the "most"

Great! Thanks Crimson : )

Good day working on the next updates in a while :) Thanks!

Hello Crimson - It's pretty much this #162 version. But here are the final tweaks we'd like to see before signing off.

Diagram = http://screencast.com/t/3plEY0S0VWn

Please make sure each of these edits and variations are created, and then we can make a final call when we see these new variations.

Thanks very much!

Thanks - will get feedback shortly.

Thanks updates are up for the variants the colors choices will also be given once the layout have been chosen/adjusted.

Hello -- and our final thoughts on this one.

See Notes Below = http://screencast.com/t/zT4mWLjKN

Thank you so much for a detailed support working on the updates in just a few hours currently travelling thanks again for your patience.

Hello Crimson, we have finalized feedback on your versions #101 and #102.

We have chopped up the logos from 101 & 102 and made a crude version of the ideal logo. Hopefully you can redesign according to the attached dropbox shared JPG image and re-proportion the individual elements to make the package work. We also want you to use the ball screw design that has a longer screw. I have inserted a photo in that diagram too onto the logo so that you will have an idea of what we want.

Please let me know if you need more clarification.

Here is an simple diagram that the team has worked up in the shared dropbox JPG below:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mkr7noc10lz11r5/final-feedback-1-28-2016-5pmest.png?dl=0

The text on that diagram is below too:

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Arcs: Dark blue, Cobalt Blue. Solid and try
a complete fade from wide to narrow

Ball Screw: Try same color as Tagline and
another matching MPM words

Tagline: Arc this along the color arc at the top.
Try dark gray and black

MPM words: Try dark gray and black. All caps

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Hello Crimson, we have finalized feedback on your versions #101 and #102.

We have chopped up the logos from 101 & 102 and made a crude version of the ideal logo. Hopefully you can redesign according to the attached dropbox shared JPG image and re-proportion the individual elements to make the package work. We also want you to use the ball screw design that has a longer screw. I have inserted a photo in that diagram too onto the logo so that you will have an idea of what we want.

Please let me know if you need more clarification.

Here is an simple diagram that the team has worked up in the shared dropbox JPG below:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mkr7noc10lz11r5/final-feedback-1-28-2016-5pmest.png?dl=0

The text on that diagram is below too:

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Arcs: Dark blue, Cobalt Blue. Solid and try
a complete fade from wide to narrow

Ball Screw: Try same color as Tagline and
another matching MPM words

Tagline: Arc this along the color arc at the top.
Try dark gray and black

MPM words: Try dark gray and black. All caps

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Will do - thanks. Are you saying that you want clarification on what to do next? Or are you saying after you make the above updates? Thanks.

Thanks for the guide making new updates in a moment not so sure with the output you can comment here anytime for the correction as soon as the updates are up.

#37
“Most Precision Motion” on top of ball screw graphic
“Superior Ball Screws” left of ball screw graphic with stacked text
“Excellence in Design & Manufacturing right of text.”
Blue graphics top encompassing entire width of logo
Green graphics below encompassing entire width of logo

#38
Longer ball screw
Green and blue ball graphic does not look proportional. Prefer graphics from # 37 instead of half moons