I like the broken beauty of #6 in the grey, but would prefer it smaller. I also would like the colors a little "hotter" and less soft. The "light" coming through is not the right kind of light either. Looks more like a diamond sparkle and would prefer something different, but don't know how to describe it, so I know that doesn't help much.
Still liking that broken beauty font. Maybe a bit smaller, but that could be tweeked later. I also can see that you are really putting some creative ideas together. Thanks for your submissions! I'm a bit overwhelmed at all the great options people are coming up with!