I would like to introduce my proposals: As you can see the symbol part is very simple and can be easily reproduced in other colours as well in one colour. The title - Morna Patrick can be placed either the way it is or under the symbol; I don't know how important is the remaining text, I decided that it should not have great protagonist but I would like to heard from you. Last, I remember that a simple symbol is always distinctive e discernible even when printed in small sizes.
I will make a small change my self - the logo area inside the rectangle is now to big. This is a defect because is not well according to the Logotournament contest rules. I will post new ones with one only change - the display size and the distance between the design and the borders of the art board. As you probably know this is only a question of display, the final file can be printed in any size.
Please take a look at #81. Is something like this what you meant? Sorry, my English can make some confusions so I must understand well your needs. I will await your feedback before trying other revisions. I am committed to win this contest and have another satisfied costumer.