#8 Brian's comments: Conceptually i like it... however i dont like the design at all - see Lauren's comments. Continue with this approach but geared more towards what we're looking for and there could be good potential!
Thanks for your efforts. Looking forward to seeing more.
Lauren's Feedback: I like the new colors, and I like that it is 3D but I feel the lines are a bit too thick. I do not like the circles dotted on the outside. I understand that they are supposed to be like heads of people but It doesn't really work. #27 looks a bit too much like fishtails. I like the font on all of these but feel it is slightly too bold. I would like to see less shading and the 3D effect coming out more in the shape. Remember, we want to be able to silk screen these as well as print them in one color as a watermark on posters or on waterbottles...etc. So if all of the 3D elements are tied up in the shading, we will lose them when we put the logo as a monotone. Thanks for these submissions though! You are on the right track :)
Brian's Feedback: Entry #25 is definitely your best concept so far. I like the periphery better than the centre though. The others are good attempts but I find them look a little too much like snow flakes. Still missing a bit of that wow factor!
Keep going, you're making great progress. Looking forward to more!
Lauren's feedback #96 is much better! I don't like the circles around it though. Can you try something without the circles? This is definitely the best one yet! Also, I'd like to see "Yoga Shala" in black. Thanks!!
Lauren's feedback: #96 the circles need to go. I really don't like them #126-#129 what are these people doing? they look like they are dancing or crouching, not doing yoga. It doesn't work for me. Keep going though your concepts get better with each try!
Here's a concept that I like - I don't like the figure, or the idea of someone in lotus. Otherwise i think it works quite nicely. I'd love to see it inspire something that speaks to us. Perhaps something a little bit more modern, dynamic or vivid.
#162 is an interesting concept... I don't really like the figure so much though, we're wanting to stay away from someone sitting in lotus position - we want something more fun, challenging and dynamic - which speaks more to who we are. If you can try this concept with other figures/poses it could work. I really want something dynamic, inviting, different, cool and modern. A little refinement and let's see how this develops!
#189 #190 Great new direction! Great concept! Unfortunately this pose is way too overdone.
If you can take this concept and put this person in to some kind of handstand, scorpion pose, or armbalance like grasshopper or flying crane pose or firefly pose then we may really have something here :)
Lauren's feedback: This is pretty cool! I would love to see it more abstract looking. Perhaps that could happen if you put the outer circles in the same color as the figure in the middle? Also I think I Prefer just the 1 circle like in #190 and #191 Great entries :)