Hi There! Thanks for the logo designs. Here's some feedback:
Entry #3: We really like where you are going with this one. Here's some revisions we'd like to see:
A. Make "Monarch Ventures" larger, more like Entry #8. I also like #8's font type combo better (keep the color the same though. Don't change to #8)
B. Change the colors. Darken the purple. Choose a more royal hue of purple. Don't like the pink at all. Please try versions with purple/gold, purple/blue, purple/red, etc.
C. Remove the embossed, shaded look. We are looking for a more flat, smooth modern look. Perhaps pronounce the outlines.
A. Don't like the color scheme. Please change based on above instructions. B. Butterfly is too cute and too feminine. Need something stronger, more modern, more abstract.
Can we see something more corporate and simple like the following in your portfolio: Pure, Redding Laser Center, International Design Group, the real estate investment trust
Sure. I can work up some more a little later today and submit them for you by this evening. Thank you very much for your feedback. Don't worry, we'll get there!
Thanks for the updated designs! We are getting there :)
Let's try to combine the best features of #21 and #24
1. Font: I prefer the font type in #24 for "Monarch". Let's use that 2. Make the word "Monarch" larger like in #21 3. Put the design from #21 into a circle like #24. Change the design to gold and the background to blue 4. Have the design be flat - no shading, embossed edges, etc. 5. the final product I would like to see in 2 layouts. One like #21 / #24 and a side by side version like #25
This Thanksgiving I am thanful that you extended the Top 5 portion of the contest! Here is a new version. I included the emblem by itself so I could present it larger to improve your viewing experience. This version is also available in IMAX 3D!! Happy Thanksgiving!