I think it is beautiful. I love your other work as well. The consensus is however, that it looks to artsy and not representative of a financial services company.
Thanks for the honest feedback and compliment! #21 shows another variation that's less artsy and more representative of a financial services company. Note the "Debt" in red, referencing "being in the red".
#29 #30 and #31 - 3 variations focusing on the red and Helvetica, simplifying and reducing the butterfly. With #31 I tried to go back to creating a whole cohesive logo like #19 that's more than just text with a picture slapped on top.