This looks really good, not sure the "by" worked, can you introduce some more red into it, not sure where, try a concave treatment on the top of the i...
Looking really good, love the concept have a few more iterations we'd like to see:
-Try putting "Modern" (title case) below
-Try putting "by Modern" (title case) below the mark
-Try using the Modernpostcard.com logo below
--Add "by" the Modernpostcard logo type below
-Could you make the stroke slightly thinner so it doesn't close up when viewed at a very small scale
-Another iteration would be to take the top of the "i" and make it convex so that the circle looks like it nests into that negative space
Also, try making the top of the "i" rounded, too. Or making the top of the 'I' concave to 'nest' the circle dot. That way the dot seems to saddle into that concave depression, and look more like an "i" versus the number ten "10". Thanks!
So this is cool...but for this to work in this treatment, we'll need it to say "By Modern" at the bottom. Since in this treatment, it would need to read "iO by Modern"
NICE. I like this solution. Try making the "i" form a serif font. It might be cool to see 'feet' at the bottom of the letter, as a contrast to the angular nature of the entire mark. Thanks!
And you'll want that black vertical to not extend all the way down...go to the top of the red bar so that the black "i" looks like it's resting on the bottom red bar. Thanks!
NICE. Try making the entire "i" red, so it separates out from the box and the "o". I like this approach, so please make some iterations on this. Make the "Modern" smaller, under the box, over the box. The Box idea is what is winning right now. Thanks!
Comment Activity
Withdrawn
any feedback again sir?
Withdrawn
Thanks :)
Withdrawn
Please check my latest entries.
Thanks :)
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
I changed the shape of the 'O' .
Does it still look like number 10?
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Please check update #201 #202 #203 #204 #205 #206 #207 #208 #209 .
Thanks! :)
Withdrawn
-Try putting "Modern" (title case) below
-Try putting "by Modern" (title case) below the mark
-Try using the Modernpostcard.com logo below
--Add "by" the Modernpostcard logo type below
-Could you make the stroke slightly thinner so it doesn't close up when viewed at a very small scale
-Another iteration would be to take the top of the "i" and make it convex so that the circle looks like it nests into that negative space
Withdrawn
Revision has been submitted.
Please check.
Thank You! :)
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Thanks! :)
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Thanks for your ranking and feedback :)
Please check my latest entriest.
Thanks! :)
Withdrawn