Modern iOLogo Design Contest

yes sir

I think this version is nice with the interplay between the vertical "modern" and the "i"

looks good, could you do a version with "modern" underneath to see how that plays out, Thanks

no?

this?

This is it, could you put just a little bit more space between modern and the "i" and just tighten up the between the i and o, but I'm not sure that is possible... Thanks

this sir?

the break on this one wasn't on the outside of the "o" it was parallel to the ground and very small, tail all black with red point.

It had a very small break or separation

that old version had the old typeface on it, but I don't have the number to it

I can't find it but you had an "o" in one of your very first iterations that had one stroke going all around and ending with a red arrow. With this new "i" being separate it might work with that version of the "o" so that the "io" would be more readable now. It's so close...

this sir?

Very intriguing, can you experiment with the point on the red tail, all of the other elements are softer, can you make the point a little softer? Thanks

Ok can you put the point (or the arrow) back on the red tail, with and without that spacer that you had.

this sir?

Could you make the top of the i concave, and the bottom of the i rounded. Could you add the tail back on to the "o" and make just the tail red, Thanks

This is getting closer, great that you added mp wordmark, please keep that. Can you take the curved section off of the "i" and make the bottom round and take the tail that goes off of the "o" and make both sections red, Make one example all read with and without the spacer. Thanks

Please add the Modern Postcard's wordmark instead of this typeface.

very interesting, can you take the tail off of the i and try s few treatments and take the section with the arrow and complete it and or try it in red.

Could you make the "O" read more like an "O" and smooth out the tail on the i.