Not bad, I like 28 & 27 best. It needs a little more "rugged" rocky look (http://www.discovermoab.com/archesnationalpark.htm). Would you consider doing a design similar to the one that was removed just a few hours ago? Obvioulsy don't use the exact same things as him, but I really like the use of the "Delicate Arch" for the "A" in MOAB.