I like this. A few things: 1) the color has gone to more of a turquoise but should be closer to the blue-green color I included in the challenge guidelines, 2) the Home-Baked Goods (which I like) is almost illegible it's so faint, 3) you've eliminated the faded/folded quality of your previous submissions, which I quite liked, and 4) the top is a bit bare, and I think it's because Miss and Molly's is next to eachother - what if you tilted the hat to the right and moved Miss up and curved it around - maybe in a different font so you consumed more of the dead space at the top? Just a thought. Thanks!
I like the idea of this one a lot more (i.e. smaller hat). Miss Molly's running outside the circle will be difficult due to the circular sign requirement, though. If you make Miss Molly's fit inside the circle, though, you'll have a lot of white space and it become smaller - not sure how to fix.
I like this more, but I'm struggling a little with a couple things: 1) the chef's hat seems too big to me and is making think more of a cloud than a hat - maybe a different graphic or an altered version of this one? Also, the wheat and the Est 2018 are making it too busy - maybe a different configuration or get rid of the wheat if we keep the hat (don't need two images that point to a bakery - one should suffice). Just throwing out ideas...
I like this, particularly the faded nature of it. It has to fit within a circle, though, so the "Miss Molly's" banner is too wide. Also, I would prefer not to have a rolling pin in the logo (long story) - perhaps something else? Thanks!
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