I really like the two almost connecting shapes, and I like the colours.
Can you try a more smooth, rounded look, rather than the paint brush look? Also, I prefer the wording in lower case (with first letters capitalised). Thanks! Miriam
Hello and thank you very much for your feedback. Here you go as you've suggested along with some color combinations and another horizontal layout possibility. I'm at your service till the end of your contest. Kindest regards,
Thank you for your feedback. Here you go a more bright version both in horizontal and vertical layout and blue/gray typefont versions. I really think that since your business deals with emotions the signature/logo should have an "organic" feel... At your service as usual. Kindest regards,
I like #92 #93 and #94! I prefer the Miriam Blakemore in Black and the Occ Ther in blue. The main reason I've been going with the metallic/bright, is because I often work in heavy industry, and probably feel like I am trying to cater to that type of person. I'm really interested in your comment about the organic feel. Do you have something in mind for that? I'm open to all suggestions!
Hello and thanks for asking. I'm uploading 2 more entries based on your previous comments and made the matallic effect more pronounced since you prefer black on the letters (to make the gradient match it). What I mean about the organinc, curved shapes of this layout to feature your innitials signature is that I think it should appeal to people's emotions since that's one of your profession objectives; I think that unnatural or too much perfect shapes wont bring that empathy out from the potential user/customer of yours. Regarding that, I've simplified even more the shapes and deconstructed the sphere and the rectangle around the innitials. If there's anything else I can do just let me know. Kindest regards,
Hmmm. I see what you're saying. It is a good point. I like your new designs, and have not quite decided if I like #104 or #105 better . I did show it to someone asked whether the grey was supposed to be an initial or not, because it sort of looks like it, but it looks more like a backwards N or a sideways S. I like the flow of the shape, but was wondering if it could be slightly more M like?
Hello Miriam and sorry for delay in my reply; since today is national holiday here, i went to the beach with my husband and just arrived. I've drawed 2 "M" shapes for your consideration both rectangular and circled layout and I'll be working tomorrow as usual. Kindest regards, Claudia
I like #177 and #171. though the latter reminds me a little of a car logo (I think because toyota and mercedes both have a metallic shape in the metallic ring). But the colour and flow are good.
Maybe with #177 think of different fonts for the M?
Also I keep going back to #55. I like the linking effect.
Thank you for your new feedback. First I need to ask you my deepest apologies cause I was forced to withdraw my circled entry cause I was menaced with a logocourt case and I had the risk then of have my participation on the contest blocked. I'm posting here some revised M shapes for the symbol and of your prefered so far (my idea on this one was the help, interaction between the left and right hand shapes that feature an abstract monogram representation of the m/b text just showing half of it with continuous swirls...) I'll check till the end oof your contest if there's anything else I can do. Have a great weekend and all the luck to your contest,