My aim was to create some dynamic and classic by using a "hand drawn" J-class racing yacht that compliments the clean font to give the logo a strong visual balance. I hope this work is to you liking or close to it. Thank You. I eagerly await your feedback.
Hello David, I can not tell if the symbol is actually a racing yacht...I do see the pennant. I like the feel. I think you are going in the right direction. Also, How would your logo look on letterhead? Can you give me a cleaner racing yacht without the pennant and or try using a pennant only? Also, the lettering under "pacific" is too small for me to read...I am assuming it states something along the lines of "Charting the right course..."
Thank you very much for the feedback and guidance. Here are the amendments to the logo. The racing yacht I had to make it totally original or we would run the risk of having a yacht that looks like the "Old Spice" or the " Nautica" . I did not want that, hence my approach to executing the yacht. I hope this is to you liking, if not, close to it. Thank you.
I guess the banner is not going to quite make it. Thank you are your effeort. On the other hand, Entry 9 & 11 are of great interest. What if we drop the "charting the right course..." also what would moving the J-Class boat on top of Ministry Pacific or to the side of the Ministry Pacific wording??? I thinking of how I would be able to use this on letterhead and business cards, etc. I think you are getting close
Tank you for the continued feedback and help. Here are the recommendations you had suggested (with a few slight alterations of my own). I truly hope these are to you liking, if not, I hope they are getting closer. Thank you.
Thanks again for the valued direction. Here are my amendments. In one I added an "ocean spray" effect to make the logo seem more lifelike. Another I redirected the yachts orientation. And re: you recommendations I made the yacht more defined. I hope these are to you liking and thank you for your time.