#6 - thanks H2. I really like the green, purple and orange colour combination. I'd like to see 'mindful journey' in lower case rather than capital letters to make it look softer and more friendly. I'd also prefer 'mindful' to be in green like in #7 (I don't like black) but I quite like the grey for 'journey'. I like the sense of movement and growth in the feet and leaf - could you make the back of the feet a bit rounder rather than pointed? The green leaf looks a bit like a tail to me - can you change it a little bit? I would also like to see the feet to the right of 'mindful journey' as I think this will look better on my website.
Many thanks for submitting the other designs too - this one is my favourite as it has the feeling of growth and movement that I want.
#16 - thanks H2. I like the more natural look to the leaves and shoots and I like the flower. However, I would prefer the feet to look more like a natural feet shape, more organic. To give a sense of moving forwards, I feel the feet should be on the opposite (right hand side) of 'mindful journey' and oriented so that they appear to be walking forwards as if on a journey. I would also like to see 'mindful journey' all in green (rather than grey), and in a rounder font, possibly lower case rather than capitals - to make it look more friendly. I really appreciate your time and effort, thank you.
Thanks also for #17. I prefer #16 because it's simpler and I prefer the purple flower.
#16 - H2, I forgot to say: please can you also remove the 'explore discover grow'. I think it will look too small on business cards. This will allow 'mindful journey' to be a bit bigger and make the overall design more simple. Many thanks.