#14 - thanks Alexandru. I like this a lot. I really like the icon: you have got a person, growth and journey down a path all in one - it's very clever! I like the orange and green colour and I also like the organic edge to the symbol. I like the large size of the 'mindful journey' text - I'd like to see it in a different colour such as purple or rich pink in a strength that balances with the other two colours. I'd also like the font to be more friendly - possible more rounded and maybe lower case rather than capital letters. I hope this helps...
I prefer this one to #15 because it looks more natural.
#20 - hi Alex. This looks really great, thank you. I love the font - it's modern and friendly. I really like the purple 'mindful' and the green 'journey', it's a good balance. I love the subtle gradient through the green in 'journey'. I also really like the leaf on the 'i', it's beautiful - could you possibly make it slightly more curled, so it definitely looks like a leaf (at the moment it reminds me a little bit of a flame on a candle). I like the purple colour, but I'm wondering if it's a little bit dark - I would like to see it in a slightly lighter shade. I really appreciate your time and effort, it's looking really great.
Thanks also for #19 - I prefer #20 because the green and purple is a good balance.
#21 - thanks very much Alex. I'm 50:50 between this and #20. I would like the purple shade to be somewhere in between these two! Can you make it darker than #21 but lighter than #20? Thank-you.
I prefer your original leaf in #20 as it's smaller and more in balance - can you use the leaf from #20. Could you also please do an alternative with the leaf angled slightly to the right to give it a feeling of movement, similar to the leaf in the orange icon? (I realise this may not look good!). Many thanks for doing this.
This is a version with a modfied slanted leaf and a subtle gradient on the 'mindful' wording to go with the rest. I tried to make it look like a light is shining on the wording so that it gives the impression of discovery.
I am also 100% for keeping it simple and meaningful, and that is I think achieved in this concept. Thank you for keeping in touch and really making it easier with your valuable feedback.
#22 - Alex, thank you very much, this looks fantastic. The purple and green now balance beautifully - I love the subtle gradient through the purple, and agree the impression is of discovery like a light shining on it. I really like this new leaf and the gentle angle over the 'm', you have created that really well. I agree, you have achieved a concept here which is simple and meaningful - and very intelligent. Thank you very much for the time and effort you have put into this for me. Alison
thanks also for #23 - I prefer the simple text of #22 and how it balances and aligns beautifully.
#22 - hi Alex. I'd be really grateful if you could do two more versions for me to see:
1) exactly as #22 but with the leaf on 'mindful' flipped 180 degrees so it is facing to the right over the 'n' (the mirror image of how it looks now) - I just want to be sure about the angle.
2) exactly as #22 with the slogan 'explore discover grow' underneath to align with the length of the logo. With explore in purple, discover in orange, grow in green (in shades that balance - to match with the rest of the logo). Perhaps use the same font you used for 'mindful journey', and in lower case, but I will leave it to your judgement. I would just like to see how the slogan looks. Thank-you very much for this, Alison