I've decided to stick with the blue but the green did give it a sorta Emerald City look which I thought was cool.. No. 33 is fine as is but #32 is maybe even more promising - what I don't particularly care for is the band or circle around the buildings. The color, shading, vertical lines are fantastic - only the buildings may look a little too commercial or "downtownish" and I'm more of a residential building products salesman. Nevertheless, if you could insert some landscape or trees in front and "residentialize" at least one building, it could easily become the best one yet. I think they both would benefit from a third color even if it's black. Nice job
I've decided to stick with the blue but the green did give it a sorta Emerald City look which I thought was cool.. No. 33 is fine as is but #32 is maybe even more promising - what I don't particularly care for is the band or circle around the buildings. The color, shading, vertical lines are fantastic - only the buildings may look a little too commercial or "downtownish" and I'm more of a residential building products salesman. Nevertheless, if you could insert some landscape or trees in front and "residentialize" at least one building, it could easily become the best one yet. I think they both would benefit from a third color even if it's black. Nice job
One last thing, pls insert Specialty Building Products under ---Inc---- similar to how Whir Splash did his. The font size may need to be condensed or you may need to may consider altering the font entirely to make it work. Specialty Bld Prod should be in a different font color as well. Try using both the original blue & whatever color you think matches. Then try the two Blues from the Greek pillar thing I uploaded a couple days ago
That's great! I still like the original (#33) but revised slightly by including Specialty Building Products below ---I INC.--- like you did on #107. The only thing is, I like the scale of the pillars or buildings (whatever they are) better in #33 because it looks taller - so maybe try and condense the fonts heights a little to pull it off. In the original it has the effect of looking up at 3 skyscraper buildings or could just as easily be construed as a M. Very cool design! Let's go back to the original color and make the specialty bld prod text just like you did on #107. Thanks x 1,000,000
Proportionally the font size and text spacing looks better on #107 but the buildings are smaller than liked on #33 & #112. I don't want Specialty Bld Prod to be TOO prominent so maybe use a lighter color font like you did in 107 or a medium or slightly lighter grey. On he #112 & 111 designs the Spec Bld Prod font seemed too large and too cramped (close together) and the font color was too dark. I'd like the plain white background. You're very close!
Updates #117, #118 actually on #107 is the same size with #112. but on the #107 the slogan and INC have a space so i have to make smaller layout. Please let me know your interest with my updates
#118 is nearly perfect but I need a little bit more separation between SpecialtyBuildingProducts. It's almost like all three words run together. What I'm talking about is creating a slightly larger gap between the words so it doesn't look like SpecialtyBuildingProducts, it look Specialty Building Products. I know you were trying to line everything up and that looks great, it's just that one minor detail and I'll declare you the winner
Thanks for feedback, updates #119, #120, #121 i try to make separation on Specialty Building Products. what do you think? please let me know your interest
I like #121 the best but want the y in "Specialty" to end where the vertical line is on the left (so just move Specialty to the right and remove the line entirely. Then move the P in Products over to left where the vertical line is and take out that line. In other words, the spacing between Specialty Bld Prod should be identical to where the lines are now in #121. Hope that makes sense. Thanks