Hi, here is my submissions (#7, #8). Hopefully pleased. Please feel free to contact me for any requests. And please let me know if you need any changes/modification. Thanks
Thanks #8 by rafa17 this is my favorite so far. I would like more enphasis on the pools in any of the designs you submit. This is a pool company so it is important this comes across in the logo. At the moment it looks like we are promoting the city of Melbourne rather than a pool company. So the font for Melbourne Pools needs to be the same size and the & spas can be smaller.
Hi rafa17. Thanks for your efforts so far. This is feedback going out to the top 10 designers. The message is exactly the same for all, other than your name. In one of my feedbacks I passed on details of a few construction companies that I believe show strength in their logo. I am a construction company for the domestic market so I think my logo needs a little flair but not over the top. By all means do your own browsing if you have time. Obviously these logos cannot be copied and besides I want my own unique logo anyway so please understand they are for inspirational purposes only. To keep things far I am providing this information to the top ten designers. If it is of help, then great, if not, at least you are all on a level playing field. Personally I appreciate the effort you are putting into the design and it does seem a little unfair that only one can be a winner because you are all deserving. When it is time for final judging I will be sending the top five designs to friends and colleagues in the industry and ask them to rank the designs from 1 to 5. Whichever design receives the highest score overall will more than likely win. This means that my number 1 ranked design will not necessarily win, it will be based on a democratic vote, so everybody in the top 5 still has a fair chance to win. If you have any other great ideas or variations to the original then I would love to see them. Again thank you so much for your efforts and please see below the websites you might want to take a look at. (www.aveng.co.za) (www.graniteconstruction.com) (www.akersolutions.com) (www.minepower.com) (www.hubard.com) (www.bhpbilliton.com) (en.shikunbinui.co.il) (www.barminco.com.au)
Hello rafa 17 I have a couple of requests for entry #7. Could you please make the motive slightly smaller (only slightly) and then make the Pools & Spas larger for balance. At the moment the logo seems to be promoting Melbourne and not the fact it is a pool construction business. Making the Pools & Spas larger should remedy this problem. I would also like to see a couple of colour combinations for the motive. I really like how you have put a circle of colour around the (&) and I also like how you have added balance to the image by utilizing the colours in the motive and coloured the Pools font in blue and the Spa font in green so I would like these concept to stay the same. I would still like to see blue in the motive and I will leave it up to you to include any other colours or other shades of blue that will work. You have a very cleaver design and the swirling motion with a birds eye view of people swimming helps keep the eye interested. Best wishes David
OK. I'll do make the revision like your request now. I'll submit it ASAP when ready about a few minutes. Thank you for give me a chanceto make updates.
Hello rafa, Thank you for the revisions. You may not have understood my request earlier. 1. Keep Melbourne the same. 2. Make the circle above Melbourne slightly smaller. 3. Make the Pools & Spas slightly bigger so that it is the same length as the Melbourne above. If you have any questions please let me know and I will try to help.