Entry #50 is very nice, but could you use the same blue water color as you had in #35. I prefer it because it is not transparent. Sorry, I'm not totally happy with the font of #50. Could you try to make it a bit stronger. Thank you.
Entry #50 islands start looking a bit like dogs paws ; )....could you concider the size of the islands. Than you! The brighter blue water is better than the dark. The dark, transparent water is a bit scary. Thanks!
Hi, Please try one more: the #50 with the #35 water color and style. And consider the sizes of the island so that they dont look like dog paw. Please no laptops or bridges. Please check another font so that the M does not look so stiff. Thank you.
Even a more simplistic version, more of a wordmark which is useful if you are going to put this on a header/footer, and many other reasons. Looks good with a gradient, and would be light on the ink when printing in black and white.
Thank you for the comment, if you happen to have any suggestions, please let me know what you could think of.
Also, if you originally wanted something simple with the slider selections, I would definitely vote going for a wordmark. #150 is very effective because it can be printed in any color needed such as for t-shirts, and also is easy enough to recognize brand-wise. I could even change the color and show you more versions of #150 if you decide that you would like to go with a wordmark.
Dear contest holder, I see you have placed my entry #35 back into the higher rankings, if you still like that logo but would like to see improvements in the text and remove the bars, I can change that for you. But in order to change, I would need a first place rank to submit new versions because the contest is currently in judging mode.