I like entry 25 - can you try getting a different male figure? Make him a bit sexier, her reminds me a hobo .. also drop the hot.
Can you do a version with a focus on "meat market" and snacks as a minor focal point. We want to really pusH "MEAT MARKET" .
Also could you do this with colors inverted ... for instance if this was on a black canvas how would it look? or if it was on a pink canvas... can we see it with a background and white silhouettes ?