Your idea (#3) is good but can you please use colors that are in the brief instead of green. Can you also put MC-MC next to the logo and not below it? And can you please do not use black for the name but one of the color of the brief?
"Hi, Here are our comentaries: For #28 but could you please try to make the circle less flat? or try to get something more in the spirit of #23 & #24. We like the idea of the written paper sheet, could you please try to use it in #24? For both #28 & #24, do not forget to put the name next to the logo and not below it. You made a good job, continue on this way. Thanks!"
Thanks for your job, below are some comments for you to be added to the general comment:
- can you try to modify windows on the buldings, we think the visual might be not good enough when printed - we like very much the paper on the entry 24 and 46 as well as the cross on the entry 46. A combination of these two logo might be good, please try to go in this way - we think you work also on the police
we like your new proposals, it's a good job. The general idea is good (83 and /or 24) but could you please work on the buldings, we are not fully satisfied with the ones proposed, please make it more inline with the idea of residential buldings,
Very good job, we like it (especially #92). However, we'd like to see if a magnifying glass can be integrated in the #92 logo. Could you please test? Thanks!
thanks for your job and congratulation for being still ranked first! However nothing is over and we have still some request for you :
- Can you please continue to work on the magnifying glass effect. keep in mind the idea of 3D effect and the fact that the one who is watching the logo should have the impression of looking the buldings through a magnyfing glass. - we also like the logo ranked 2 (#86) because the buldings seem more residential, please continue to work on this (more residential type of buldings) - please modify also the colors: we would like to see a lighter grey and blue (like logo ranked 32 (#91) and 25 (#66). The idea is very much like the quicktime player logo (from Apple)
- we think you should work also on the police (use gradation/shading and change also the format)
Could you please kindly send us new proposals? You can continue to work with the ideas of your logo #103 and our comments sent on Nov 10th. Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any questions.
#115 is better, but we think that there are too many buildings. Could you please try to remove the big grey one in the middle? Could you also put the paper sheets a bit bigger (paper sheets have to be present as in the logo #92)? Regarding the magnifying glass, could you please re-equilibrate the 2 elements: handle and ring? And we'd like to have the impression of looking through the magnifying glass. Could you please work on that?
Clearly we like your new buldings. We have still some comment on the logo:
- please keep only 1 or 2 buldings and 1 or 2 houses, it will lighten the overall picture and it will allow you to increase the size of the paper/sheet. it will then be more visible! - do not use both the ring and the magnifying glass in the same logo. Please try to make proposals with one of each, but continue to work on both ideas - the magnifing glass in the 115 is close to what we want but probably a little bit bigger, without the ring and with less buldings/houses
Regarding buildings and paper sheets that's good. Could you please get the magnifying glass more stylish? The handle is nice but the glass is a bit massive, try to get it more stylish please. And is it posible to get the glass a bit bigger?
Hi Aldeano, Thx for the job. We are still not happy with the magnifying glass. Finally it look like that there is no way to get what we want! but it's not a big deal.
Let's re-start with the logo 92 (ranked N°1). Please use buldings and houses of logo 122 into logo 92, use colors of logo 122 into 92 (actually please make it with both colors (92&122). Could you please also try to inverse the ring i.e: from the bottom left corner to the top right corner.
Thx, we are close to what we want ! - could you please replace the tick box on the paper by an euro sign (€) with the same size - concerning the ring, could you please either delete it completly or try to lighten it (smaller one !)
Thanks for the new logos! - for #128, could you please put the buildings like those in the #125? - for #125 & #126, we like the ring going from bottom left corner to the top right corner but could you please try to get the ring less thick?
- for #132 could you please try to change the € sign with the v sign that you used before for the others logos? - for #125 / #126 / #129 / #130 could you please make the ring as slim as the line used in #132?
we are close to the end!! thx agin for our job. Below are our last comments !
we are still hesitating between #134 and # 133. Could you please work on the # 133: - please reduce a little the size of the paper/sheet (more like the #134) - please try also to make the logo more dynamic
Finally at the end of the contest, could you please give us the AI format for the choosen logo?