Marin Services for WomenLogo Design Contest

Hello. I really like this logo but I think I would prefer to have something that emphasizes the word WOMEN instead of MARIN. I REALLY like the color combination and I like the swan but the font on the "services for women" is a little bit hard to read and could be changed I think.

Thank you so much for the feed back. I will work on getting a revised version up as soon as possible. Thanks for the encouraging words.

-Lailoken

Thanks for the revised. I am thinking the font is the thing thats in the way here. Or maybe it is the color combo after all in combonation with the font. I am not sure.