Hello Patrick. Here is the crisper, more stylized updated version per your brief requirements. Please let me know if I can be of any further assistance. Your feedback is appreciated. Thanks Nickolas
Hello MS, my name is Nickolas. I am very pleased that you like my entry to represent your new identity. I would like to perfect this entry for you (#28). So please let me know if I can make any changes/additions that would meet and exceed your standards.
Thank you, and I look forward to working with you.