Diana and I don't immediately understand the shape, though, and that's probably not good for our readers. Maybe something different and more incorporated with the words?
Would also like to see the tag line incorporate in your next concepts and variations.
now you're starting to think nautical. i don't think we're quite there, meaning the wave, but i like how you're now starting to get your head into our game like you did with foxdale, bigfoot print, vip golf services, etc.
they really leveraged your typographic strength and art/image integration.
funny thing is, i'm betting on you to pull this one off.