Hello - thank you for your submission. I like that you took a different direction with the logo. The bird looks a bit crow-ish to me, however and isn't quite as "business" as I would like to see.
made it more like a magpie with the markings... and a little less cartoonish.... as far as 'business' - it is important to make it stand out and be noticed as well as to be flexible to be used in many different applications. Our primary business at BusinessBuilders is printing on promotional merchandise - I try to think would would be effective on a shirt or on a business case ...
Thanks - really like the sense of personality you are achieving. Will you please work with #80 to adjust proportions a bit so that the bird is more distinctively like a magpie? Definitely don't want to compromise on the sense of whimsy and distinctiveness, but the current design looks a bit like a cartoon toucan to me.