This one is sharp! With the lines above and below the company name, the ratio to the illustration looks great. I made a comment on the one without the lines to increase the font size...to improve the ratio.
Of your most recently submissions, I think I like this one the best. Can you try a version where its all written on one line...with the company name on the left, font size all the same, and the illustration on the right?
I also wanted to call this one out...I like the direction of it as well. I like the illustration...here are some thoughts. Would be great to see a different font...I do not like the font. The ones I think I like the best from the other submissions are when its spelled in all caps and the same height...like MAGNUM SURGE. I also like 2 color better than 1. Maybe use the orange with the darker gray you used in #122. As for the illustration, it would be great to see if you could change this just a little into something that looks a bit like a phoenix. You could probably do that by slightly changing the feathers/wings to being less rounded and the head to be more like a phoenix vs a dove-like head.
I like this one the best of the ones you submitted, but I feel like it needs something else. I like the color and how you did not cross the A (its like an upside down V...I like that...clever). I like the G and the art around it. Maybe increase the weight of the font a little? And for SURGE, maybe increase the weight, decrease the height, and stretch it a little wider...so that it is about 75% of the width of MAGNUM?? Just some thoughts!
Here a new concept I'm trying to combine the letters "M & S" into something unique and simple. If you have any other suggestions, please do not hesitate to tell me. Thank you.
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The new concept here, the arrows can describe the "surge". Thank you.
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Thank you for the TOP Rank.
If you still require a revision to the design, please tell me.
Warm Regards,
Anung.
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Update on entry #155 & #156.
What do you think?
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Update on entry #153
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Thanks for your feedback.
Update on entry #150.
Variations on entry #151 & #152,
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If you want a "phoenix", I made a different style, here entry #141 & #142. I think more visible as the "phoenix". .
Hopw to your liking :)
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Thank you for your feedback. Update on entry #140.
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Here a new concept I'm trying to combine the letters "M & S" into something unique and simple. If you have any other suggestions, please do not hesitate to tell me. Thank you.
Kind Regards,
Anung.
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Thanks for the ranking.
If you want changes to the design (eg color, font or whatever), please tell me. Your feedback is very valuable to me.
Kind Regards,
Anung.