Sorry it took so long to get you a revision - I was away this weekend. Thank you for the constructive feedback - I hope that this is what you had in mind. Please let me know if you'd like to see anything else.
#23 Improvement of font structure however color still difficult to read from a distance Try change font color and dragon accents to complementary colors like dark orange and lighter orange or something like that..... red and the purple just aren't working Try different iterations of background text color - not green - perhaps something lighter to help make it more readable? Really like the Dragon but wouldn't mind a version of him holding a plant - like the tomato plant in #22 with the stars which make the dragon look magical Otherwise like the design as it's clean.
I added some "magic" to this one. You can see the stars around the wordmark. Works best if it's on a colored background. It's kind of hard to see in these small thumbnails - but trust me it's there and looks cool.
I saw that you had extended the contest. Let me know what else you'd like to see. Am I going entirely in the wrong direction with this? If so, let me know and I'll do some changes. Here's a different set up for you…
Hi guys - I just wanted to let you know that I will be away from the computer until Monday. I will still be able to answer any mails (iPhone) but won't be able to do any changes until I return. I hope that everything is okay with the design - if not let me know and I'll get to it on Monday. Keep in mind that the first ranked designer is allowed to do changes in judging mode and that you are able to move the designers in any position you see fit.