MADPENSLogo Design Contest

Please check my latest revision, does it look skinny? is it like that?
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Let's also make her slightly thinner.

Let's have the quill a bit smaller and the opening in the circle a bit bigger. San Serif font. Maybe Erbar, or Gil Sans or Something else. See if you can get her dress to be swept up a bit in the swirl you have going with the two circle pieces. Also show me a variation with the two circle shapes in the same green color. Nice Work, thank you for making the adjustments.

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Please check my latest revision, is it on the right track?
If you have any other requests or questions please let me know :)
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I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround, a open or closed circle or some variation on that is desired. My AI mockup got the quill wrong. The quill needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. The triangle part needs to go up and to the right. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. The text should not overpower the image. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.

Thank you for your hard work I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround. My AI mockup got the quill wrong. The quill needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. The triangle part needs to go up and to the right. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. The text should not overpower the image. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.

I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround. My AI mockup got it wrong. The quill needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. I I I I like how you handled the circle with two colors. The triangle part needs to go up and to the right. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. The text should not overpower the image. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.

I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround. My AI mockup got it wrong. The quill needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. The triangle part needs to go up and to the right. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. The text should not overpower the image. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.

I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. My AI mockup got it wrong. It needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.

I definitely do not like a square or rectangular surround. Also the quill in her arm is reversed in the sample. I do not like the background to be a solid color. White is ok, Black may be ok, but no color background. My AI mockup got it wrong. It needs to be flipped and a bit smaller. Do not mention CREATIVE WRITING CLUB, and the fonts used should look like a classic look, closer to 75 years or so older. I do not want any modern or sci-fi fonts. Thank you.