MADPENSLogo Design Contest

A little more space between the S and the _
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Write MADPENS with a cursor after like MADPENS_
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Hello.
The difference is 108 is a slightly thicker at the bottom of the M.
I've made the change and uploaded the new edit to #124
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I like what we have here. I can't tell the difference between 108 and 109. Please try to alter the M at the bottom so that it at least the middle of the M sweeps a bit more to the left so that it fills in a bit more of the circle idea. If it doesn't work, we will default back to this one. Thank you.

Looking very good.

Can you taper these a bit more so then end more at a point than long and flat?

some space between here and the pen please.

I like what you have done here. Look at #91 at the bottom. See if you can get closer to that, keeping the M, but the bottom filled it a bit more to feel more like a circle at the bottom. Probably in between what you have now and #91.

Thinner please.

make the font a bit thicker so it has more presence. We don't want it heavy though. have the bottom of the M flow more towards an overall circle for the bottom of the design.

Much closer.

Make this longer towards the head, just not as much as before.

Make the M a bit thicker

I like how you have hidden the M in the dress, please make ti less heavy. Overall the design is much closer. Thank you.

Make the font this big or slightly larger please.

Make the staff shorter so the logo is not as tall. Make the bottom of the staff end earlier. Make the white part of the quill at the top section more pronounced as it gets lost when the image gets smaller.

Don't need this line

Shorten this but not dramatically.

not this font

Let's get the staff shorter so it the top of the design is not as tall. Please end the swirl that comes closer to her head sooner. I don't think we need the line to the right of the staff and the left of the end of the design. Make font smaller please. I like this a lot.

Let's make the font smaller and not as heavy. Please make the pen staff about 20% shorter so the overall design is not as tall.

Hello.
Thank you for the feedback.
I've made the changes and uploaded the new concepts with the m in the dress swirl to #84 #85 #86
Thanks again and kind regards

See if you can hide an M in the swirl of the dress,

Font too heavy, let's go with one color.

Great work so far. Also try a san serif font that is vintage and smaller.