Hi Charcoal,
Thanks for your first entry!
We really like the clean & sharp feel of this logo. The font is great, as is the spacing & layout. The design elements are quite well done, as it feels very polished and professional.
However, we're not too keen on the "beams of light" idea, as it is overdone and a bit cliche. (If we HAD to have beams of light, however, we would like this implementation. We like how you've taken something somewhat "standard" and turned it into an elegant display that says something unique about the high-quality of our work... but we just can't do the "beams of light" idea.)
The whole thing is also a little too feminine. The icon looks somewhat like a flower, and the light blue is too soft. We don't need a masculine logo, necessarily, but we don't want a feminine one, either.
Hope that helps--we'd love to see more ideas from you!
Thanks,
Andrew