You´re feedback is great as always. Yes it will look better. Please check here bellow, and let me know what do you think please:
- #239
If you need anything else just let me know. Here on Portugal is late, i will probably sleep in few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more changes if needed, feel free Lucas.
I’m 99% sure this one is it. I wanted to see if you could try one more slight change to the waves. They look great but I’m wondering if you could try to make theam just slightly less sharp and pointy. See new attached picture on my contest page for reference. Like i said, this is probably the one but I’d like to see just that subtle change to the waves if possible.
I´m very glad you like the logo. About those variations it´s okay do not worrie.
For the stationary, we can work after the contest for sure. But because of the rules on the website i only can quote after the contest is complete, i will leave you the link bellow in case you need to check, you can read the last point: https://logotournament.com/help/designer/128
I´ve submited other variations regarding color please check bellow:
- #231 | #232 | #234 | #236
You will also received files like:
- logo RGB (for screen)
- logo CMYK (for print)
- Black & White logo
- Jpeg and PNG (with transparency) in high, medium and low resolution
* vector files *.ai | *.eps and pdf are inclued also
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else or have doubts Lucas.
I think we might have a winner here. I will likely need this logo in at least one other color scheme (see #211), plus I really need to get the logo with just “Lucas Orthodontics” by itself (for stationary, letterhead, etc.) Would you be able to put together a package like this for me after the competition? Let me know how much this would cost and we can make arrangements.
I’ve been working on a new design for the waves and I think I found something that I like. I posted a new image to logotournament.com. See what you can do with the new wave design. Refine, touch-up.
Thank you for fixing the spacing and alignment on “Orthodontics”. The waves should be only on the lower third of that one mountain on the left, with the waves coming up out of the white below the mountain. Please also make the waves each swoop up to a little point/ peak like in the picture I️ drew.
Thanks for these new concepts. I think I like the original (#193) better with the 3 mountain peaks. I think it's more balanced
I think if we just kept it simple and kept #193 as is but put some small waves near the base of the far left mountain, then it would look more balanced.
I tried uploading some new images of what I was thinking to postimages/org again. Let me know if you still don't get them and I will upload them logotournament instead. Obviously, mine are rough sketches. You can do a much better job at making them look like ripples/waves.
Last thing, I think there is a space between the stacked double lines and the "O" in "Orthodontics". Can you check to see if you can squeeze the "O" closer to the stacked double lines? See how the "S" is closer to the lines on the right side of the logo
I´m glad you like them. I appreciate your feedback.
Yes i can see them, thanks. I´ve submited revisions based on your photos, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #216 | #217
Just a quick update because in Portugal is late and i will probably sleep in few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed Lucas, feel free please.
I was searching for the links to see the images you uploaded, but i coudn´t find them. If you upload on postimage website, you will have a link you will need to copy past here, so i can see the image. But if it´s easier, you can do that on Logotournament, on your interface you can add attachements to the contest page somewhere.
But i´ve studied a few alternatives, that i think look better and clean:
- #213 | #214 | #215
Let me know what do you think of them Lucas. As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
I uploaded a couple of pictures of what i thought the ocean could look like. They sort of resemble this image. I'm wondering if there's a way to minimize or eliminate the small mountain peak on the left side and have the ocean in it's place. I'm not sure if that would make it look off-balance or too asymmetric though.
I´ve worked a few designs, also i´ve tried with the ripples, but they doesn´t work very well. Please check these revisions, and let me know your thoughts about them:
- #204 | #205 | #206
Yes for sure if you want to draw and send to me, please upload here the image: https://postimages.org/. And you can copy-paste the link on my comment section.
As far as the ocean/water on the left-hand side of the mountains go, I was thinking instead of having palm trees or boats, just having the hill gradually taper down and lead to the water (maybe have a few small ripples or waves in the water). I can draw you a picture if you'd like
I´ve worked on revisions based on your feedback. I´ve tried to keep it simple on the left side on the mountain also with a few costal views, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #193 | #194 | #195
As always feel confortable to ask if you need anything else please.
This is almost perfect. Can we try just a couple more things:
1) Include the Norcal star at the bottom (no surfboards--changed my mind)
2) Go back to the cursive style writing
for "orthodontics"
3) Make "Lucas Orthodontics" a little bigger, scale down other things just slightly as needed
4) Last thing: can we try to see what it would look like to have ocean or costal shoreline on the left side of the mountain logo (might look too busy, but it might perfectly capture what I want)
Please check revisions done for your consideration and let me know what do you think of them:
- #176 | #177 | #178 | #179 | #180
I only didn´t submited other colors to not confuse you with many entries. I think we can do the colors, after we refine this one. Just let me know the one or ones you like, and i will adapt to blue color combo also. You mean this blue #152?
Anything else you may need feel free to ask please Lucas.
So far this is one of my very top designs. My favorite color combos are this one and the blue combo
I was wondering if we could try this logo but with a few changes:
1) Instead of "Estd. 2017" banner, try "Folsom, CA" banner
2) Instead of the cross-poles at the bottom, can we try cross-surfboards? I would also love to see if the Nor-cal star (google for reference) would look good here instead
3) Can we try "orthodontics" in cursive (as it is) and one not in cursive
4) I'm interested in playing around with the tooth/heart in the center. I can't decide if we can do without it or not
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You´re feedback is great as always. Yes it will look better. Please check here bellow, and let me know what do you think please:
- #239
If you need anything else just let me know. Here on Portugal is late, i will probably sleep in few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more changes if needed, feel free Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope all is well with you. And thanks again for the feedback. I´m glad you like also the color variations.
Sure i can, please check revisions done for your consideration bellow, and let me know your thoughts about them:
- #237 | #238
Just let me know if you need anything else please Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks very much for your great update.
I´m very glad you like the logo. About those variations it´s okay do not worrie.
For the stationary, we can work after the contest for sure. But because of the rules on the website i only can quote after the contest is complete, i will leave you the link bellow in case you need to check, you can read the last point:
https://logotournament.com/help/designer/128
I´ve submited other variations regarding color please check bellow:
- #231 | #232 | #234 | #236
An these ones also:
- #233 | #235
You will also received files like:
- logo RGB (for screen)
- logo CMYK (for print)
- Black & White logo
- Jpeg and PNG (with transparency) in high, medium and low resolution
* vector files *.ai | *.eps and pdf are inclued also
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else or have doubts Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I think we might have a winner here. I will likely need this logo in at least one other color scheme (see #211), plus I really need to get the logo with just “Lucas Orthodontics” by itself (for stationary, letterhead, etc.) Would you be able to put together a package like this for me after the competition? Let me know how much this would cost and we can make arrangements.
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I really love this new wave format. Personal option, this one is my favorite. Thank you very much for the suggestion again Lucas. I appreciate it.
I think this one goes more in line with the image on the right side of the mountain, and will make the design with a great balance.
Please check and let me know what do you think:
- #230
If you need me to work on more variations feel confortable to ask Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I’ve been working on a new design for the waves and I think I found something that I like. I posted a new image to logotournament.com. See what you can do with the new wave design. Refine, touch-up.
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And thanks again, your suggestions are great. I also like more with the little peak on the wave.
Please check revisions and let me know your thoughts:
1 - #224 | #225 | #226
// waves coming from the white below the mountain
2 - #227 | #228 | #229
// waves coming from the white on the left of the mountain
Just let me know if you need anything else please Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I appreciate you quick feedback. Yes on logotournament works better the upload of the images. Thanks.
Please check my revisions for your appreciation and let me know what do you think:
1 - #218 | #220
2 - #221 | #223
I´ve also fixed the alignment on the "O" in "Orthodontics".
Anything else you may need just let me know Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I think if we just kept it simple and kept #193 as is but put some small waves near the base of the far left mountain, then it would look more balanced.
I tried uploading some new images of what I was thinking to postimages/org again. Let me know if you still don't get them and I will upload them logotournament instead. Obviously, mine are rough sketches. You can do a much better job at making them look like ripples/waves.
Last thing, I think there is a space between the stacked double lines and the "O" in "Orthodontics". Can you check to see if you can squeeze the "O" closer to the stacked double lines? See how the "S" is closer to the lines on the right side of the logo
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I´m glad you like them. I appreciate your feedback.
Yes i can see them, thanks. I´ve submited revisions based on your photos, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #216 | #217
Just a quick update because in Portugal is late and i will probably sleep in few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed Lucas, feel free please.
Will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
- https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I like the new renditions.
I uploaded the photos to my interface. I tried uploading them to postimages.org but wasn't having any success. Let me know if you can see them
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I was searching for the links to see the images you uploaded, but i coudn´t find them. If you upload on postimage website, you will have a link you will need to copy past here, so i can see the image. But if it´s easier, you can do that on Logotournament, on your interface you can add attachements to the contest page somewhere.
But i´ve studied a few alternatives, that i think look better and clean:
- #213 | #214 | #215
Let me know what do you think of them Lucas. As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for your great feedback again.
I´ve worked a few designs, also i´ve tried with the ripples, but they doesn´t work very well. Please check these revisions, and let me know your thoughts about them:
- #204 | #205 | #206
Yes for sure if you want to draw and send to me, please upload here the image:
https://postimages.org/. And you can copy-paste the link on my comment section.
If you need anything else feel free to ask Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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As far as the ocean/water on the left-hand side of the mountains go, I was thinking instead of having palm trees or boats, just having the hill gradually taper down and lead to the water (maybe have a few small ripples or waves in the water). I can draw you a picture if you'd like
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I appreciate your suggestions.
I´ve worked on revisions based on your feedback. I´ve tried to keep it simple on the left side on the mountain also with a few costal views, please check and let me know what do you think:
- #193 | #194 | #195
As always feel confortable to ask if you need anything else please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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1) Include the Norcal star at the bottom (no surfboards--changed my mind)
2) Go back to the cursive style writing
for "orthodontics"
3) Make "Lucas Orthodontics" a little bigger, scale down other things just slightly as needed
4) Last thing: can we try to see what it would look like to have ocean or costal shoreline on the left side of the mountain logo (might look too busy, but it might perfectly capture what I want)
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Thanks for the great feedback.
I´m glad you like my logo.
Please check revisions done for your consideration and let me know what do you think of them:
- #176 | #177 | #178 | #179 | #180
I only didn´t submited other colors to not confuse you with many entries. I think we can do the colors, after we refine this one. Just let me know the one or ones you like, and i will adapt to blue color combo also. You mean this blue #152?
Anything else you may need feel free to ask please Lucas.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I was wondering if we could try this logo but with a few changes:
1) Instead of "Estd. 2017" banner, try "Folsom, CA" banner
2) Instead of the cross-poles at the bottom, can we try cross-surfboards? I would also love to see if the Nor-cal star (google for reference) would look good here instead
3) Can we try "orthodontics" in cursive (as it is) and one not in cursive
4) I'm interested in playing around with the tooth/heart in the center. I can't decide if we can do without it or not
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Hope you´re having a great day.
I´m glad you like my logo concept.
If you need changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João