Cool stuff.. here's my feedback: I don't want that embossed effect on the text, I just want solid non-white colored text for the name of the website, and I don't want a beer in the background as you have it.
I've done a really rough mockup here to show you what I'm thinking:
Entry #17 Hi from Greece, i've tried to make something using your rough mockup as a guide.I hope you like it.Feel free to let me know what you think. best regards boybud40
- The head on the beer looks more like cream than beer foam, maybe thin it out/make it look thinner with finer consistency. - The logo needs to be longer than it is tall, I'm shooting for a ration of 3:1 so please try adjusting it to match that. - The mug of beer is too tall, needs to be shorter. - The main font for "LotsOfHead.com" is a little too boring/quiet, please try something different but still web 2.0
Thanks a lot for the hard work! Excited to see the updates!
- the beer foam looks more like separate clouds, it should be more like one continuous piece (see what the other artist did on #16). The consistency of it looks like cream, not foam. - move the tagline below the beer - not overlaid on top of the beer, and make its font color blue or another dark color that fits in with the overall logo - beer foam on the glass of beer same thing - it looks too thick and creamy, not like a beer head which is more foamy than creamy.
#25 is still the best but I'd still like to see some additional changes:
- The foam on top of the beer looks like separate clouds, they should instead look like one solid piece of foam, without separations between them. - This has the proper size ratio of the LotsOfHead.com characters compared to the drawing. The new ones, #27 & #28 - the beer foam is too big, too pronounced, it dominates the words LotsOfHead.com.
If you make these changes to #25, I think we'll be really close to the top ranking.
My thoughts are to add some lines to represent the edges of the beer glass a little bit more clearly. So maybe you remove a little bit of the foam that's hanging over the left and right edges so you can clearly show the edges of a glass so it's clear that this is a glass of beer (like the artist has done for entry #24).
Entry #44 I've aded some stripes which i think they are showing the glass better. I 'm afraid that if i remove some foam,then will look like ice cream.I 'll try to do it and will see if it's working. Bud
Cool stuff, I like #53 the best. Here's what I'd like to see you to change on #53:
- a deeper brown for Lots & Head - the line for the glass on the left is too sloped, it needs to be closer to vertical - would also be helpful to maybe take a little bit of the foam off of the right side so you can also show a vertical line to represent the edge of the glass - overall, the foam still looks a little more like snow than foam, please see what the other artist who has the 1st ranked drawing did for foam, that's what I'm looking for - I think those vertical stripes that show reflection are a bit too much, maybe you could have one in there, but multiple like you have it is too much
Entry #69 Entry #70 Hi from Greece, i've made changes to the foam both sides and i've made the slogan larger.Also i've made the brown colour deeperand removed some stripes.Wait for your comment. boybud40