Lori BonazzoliLogo Design Contest

This is a very good illustration, please be sure to incorporate "The eye of horus" (google it) and please make sure the eye is dramatized and very sharp, feminine - see this image of egyptian eye makeup for inspiration http://cdn2.stylecraze.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/Mineral-Eye-MAkeup-For-Egyptians.jpg

Font is legible but a little too plain/soft, but this is a great start!

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
I will surely make new variations and submit them during the day.
Best,
Aleksandra

This also may help - I feel you are so close just missing the eye elements that make it more dramatic... maybe look at this dragon eye http://cf067b.medialib.glogster.com/media/6e/6eeb91e7241008d4f5d2b6811353abac40852dfff522a09e77b9ba8212c5d78c/dragon-2.jpg

See the angle of it, this is what we want for the eye itself

thank you!

Thank you Lori!
Here is my new design based on your feedback #78
I will submit variation with font as well, at the moment I am focused on graphic itself :)
Let me know your thoughts.
Thanks,
Aleksandra

new design #79

new variation #84

color variation #85

These eyes are awesome but make sure you google "eye of horus" and make sure to make it authentic, then add on to that

and please make sure you include "Lori Bonazzoli"!

Hi Lori,
I have read and discovered that each element of "eye of horus" has its own meaning and each of them represents six senses - smell, sight, thought, hearing, taste, and touch. After that I realize how much is important that every aspect be included. Having that on mind, I have created new design #90
I will upload color variations soon.
Thanks for the guidelines,
Aleksandra

color variation #91

update #92

We really like 90 and 93 pleae add in some more dramatice eye shape (dramatic lashes)

We really like seeing it without color as well, please try 93 a bit more dramatic, with 2-3 dramatic lashes, in a similar fashion as 90 with a single color

I am not 100% sure I want the heart replicated in the eye and the O but I do like it

Thanks and look forward to more

I do like the color ones too, lust a bit too bust with multiple colors, maybe just one highlight color (the red or purple)

Thank you!
here is new variation #110

new one #111

update #114

new variation #122

update #134

two color variation #136 #135

#90 We really like this entry can you please use a new type face, maybe something more feminine, not all caps or a script based font

can you please try lori on left, eye logo in middle and bonazzoli on right

Please try the same with entry #93 but instead of the colors used can you try more of a monotone, maybe borders grey and more soft colors inside. It's a little too colorful, we are not after easter egg colors or too much color, please try another variation or 2 of this one (it's also the logo we have selected at #1 but the all white isn't working

We requested script font but need it to be legible as well, I know this a tough thing - thanks for all of your hard work!

#90 We really like this entry can you please use a new type face, maybe something more feminine, not all caps or a script based font

can you please try lori on left, eye logo in middle and bonazzoli on right

Please try the same with entry #93 but instead of the colors used can you try more of a monotone, maybe borders grey and more soft colors inside. It's a little too colorful, we are not after easter egg colors or too much color, please try another variation or 2 of this one (it's also the logo we have selected at #1 but the all white isn't working

We requested script font but need it to be legible as well, I know this a tough thing - thanks for all of your hard work!

We really like the work you did on mangia!, Alison Dooley, Fine Saadia, Sullivan Design -

Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback!
All of the fonts that you pointed out, are hand drawn fonts, that are uniquely created for the clients.
It will be my pleasure to create one for you, I will just need some time but as soon as I finish I will submit it.
Sincerely,
Aleksandra

We'd like to have the eye portion more integrated into the name so if we can lose the square around it and try that out, we really love your work, thank you

Good morning!
Here is my first variation with hand drawn font #146

new one #149

morning!! Could #148 be a little more edgy? its a little too pretty but Im liking the simplicity. Also could the eye be in between my first and last name and a little less wispy.. kinda more like #110. And could we possibly try with no heart in the middle of the eye? Every day this is getting more and more exciting, its really fun working with you. Thank you!!

Thank you! It's fun working with you too :)
I will submit shortly new ones with requested changes.

I'm trying to put the eye between your first and last name, but it doesn't look balanced at all, because Lori have four letters and your last name nine...still working on it and I hope that I will find some solution.
Thanks for understanding!

...until then here is new layout and font style #150

integrated eye into the letters #152

update #153

new variation #154

hmm... its coming along for sure.. I can safely say you won ;) ..! im just sitting with it right now.. ill be in touch in a few.. Thank you!

Thank you very much for keeping me updated! I really appreciate it.
I will be online, in case that you need me.

Aleksandra

Hi Aleksandra!
Im wandering back to #110.. Im crazy. i know.. i just want it perfect ;) Can we play with taking the red hearts out of #110 and also leaving the heart in just the eye? Let me know if you are still down to work on this!!!

~Thanks!

Sure! I am here and I will submit soon new variation.

Cool!! Does your mind when you look at #154 and #110 see a way to combine those two ideas? Like take the style of each and see if we can come up with something?? Just thinking, since i am drawn to both of those maybe we cld play with this idea a little bit ..... thoughts?

Here is combination of both eyes (from entry 154 and 110) #156
If you have anything else on mind, feel free to suggest.

update #157

ok, i like the eye for #110 better.. can we play with no heart in the O of Lori?

without heart in "O" #158

hi!! #158 is looking good! I like the lori over the bonazzoli.. Can we play with an edgier font?

How about this one #159 ?

hi.. so here is what im experiencing... i love what you have done, im just not sure if its all the way me..... yet.

is it possible to play with just my name. no picture. different fonts. different ways. simple to bold...

let me know, no worries if not..

~Lori

new font #161

with an eye #161

hmmmm can the font be more spherical rather then so square?

Do you mean on the font that I used for "Lori"?
If I make "L" more spherical it will look like "C"
Or did you mean on something else?

new variation #162