Long Reach FoundationLogo Design Contest

Great start, I really like the vibe this throws off with the abstract piece, run with this and see what other versions we can get together.

Thanks for the feedback. Will try my best with other version :)

Best Regard "Shangrila"

Doing great work!

Not feeling the extra circle. Try altering the font and writing styles!

sure wait a moment :)

I'm interested to see what you can do with Entry #25 - Layout is interesting. Can we include a beach reference in there somewhere? Maybe the arms are the boardwalk and a sunset or something over his arm so it looks like the person could also be the ocean? Let's see what you can do.

Font for writing also still isn't quite where we want it.

Something a little softer and artistic perhaps, it looks like it's a built-in font.

thanks for the direction, let me try to develop :)

Awesome stuff. The sun is a little too big upon viewing it, makes us look like a travel agency. Let's try some concepts with a smaller sunset over just the right "arm" of the logo, maybe mess with the color gradient to make it look like a sunset on the "water" of just the right arm. I like the boardwalk concept. No palm trees needed.

The font is still not quite there, this one is a little too on the artsy side, very curvy. I'm looking for something in between what you originally used and the text you have now. I like where this is heading.

I GOT IT! What if we make the "head" a sun somehow without making it too cheesy? Think you can make that work?

Or, what if we extend the "wingspan" of your character to extend across the entire "Long Reach" text, make the text a specific color, then make the color of the logo gradually shift gradient from one color, to the color of the font, in order to symbolize the "extended reach." Let me know if you understand that, because it's late, and I probably came off as ridiculous there. You're a gem.

Thanks a lot for your appreciation, sorry for late revision because of time lag between America and Indonesia, will work for revision now :)

No problem at all! #70 is interesting. Can you condense it back to one color with the text on top in a different font? Like the blue used in your original #25 with the text across?

Can we see some variations on that?

Also, I like the solid "boardwalk" borders used in #25 more than the "sketch" tones used in your later ones.

Thanks for getting back to us! Great stuff.

Let's see 71 with no sky/water. Just the abstract.
I like both parts of 25 but they feel like two separate pieces. I'd like to see more integration - overlapping or proportion change?
And let's see #69 with varying shades of blue. Lighter blue for the sun, darker for the water.

Yes, i feel that way to, difficult to incorporate between symbol and text. Still thinking to incorporate that element

Love #85 - still the font isn't there. Let's try some different fonts. Think we're pat on the design.

And tweak the layout of the words. Great stuff so far! :-D

Hi Sangrila!
I really love what you have done with #143 to integrate the picture and the text. I wonder if you could manipulate it a little bit for me.

-I prefer the font in 84, so if you could play with the fonts for #143 that would be great.
-I also really like how the circle has the indents like it is the sun in #84 can you add that to #143?
-I wonder if the arms/boardwalk could be stretched similar to #84. I would love to see that.

Thank you so much for all of your work!

Already make some revision, how its looks ?

Great!

145 is really getting to the right place. Would it be possible for you to stretch the arms even further making them almost the length of the text? If you could also raise the text up so that the boardwalk looks like it comes from behind the word Long. I would also like to see some more fonts, not as round as in 143 but not as stiff as in 145, I like the font in 85 but I'm not sure if it will stand out enough across the picture.

Thank you so much for all of your work. I look forward to seeing more.

Already make a change at #149

How with the text at #150 ?

Good, if you could put up a few with different fonts and variations of the text across the picture that would be great!

Thanks.

Its already late of night in Indonesia, i think i have to take a rest now, please leave any direction or revision :) and i will work tomorrow. And if you want, you can surf at google what type or name of font you like, it will be vey help me to make logo that fix much with you and your foundation :)

Best Regard "Shangrila"

Hey Shan! Can #151 and #172 have a baby?

you mean place a baby element on that ?

Sorry, Shan. No I meant can you combine the elements of each to form one new logo? I like the diagonal look of your #151 with the boardwalk in #172

owh i see, but i can't submit anything since i'm not top 5 designer

Oh shoot, ok hang on

Should be good now

thanks for the opportunity, will make the baby now :)

working for completely different design