Long 2 TouchLogo Design Contest

#25 - the pink shape is just to give an idea of #24 on a bottle.

Wow. I really like your approach. It's a tat hard to read pressed together. Maybe you can play around a bit with the balance of the elements in the logo? Open it up a bit more? I like the O's that remain the same in the different text directions.

Looking forward to seeing more from you.

#27 - I could try this design on the other bottle shape if you like the design.

Thanks for the feedback and noticing the O's. I'll see how it could be improved.

I like the one on the bottle. Will you take into account the remarks I made? Opening it up a bit? It feels too tight, if you know what I mean. Give it a some air ;)

#34 - do you think it needs more air than this? I could open it out more if you want. Maybe the 2 could do with being not so tight in the white rectangle.

Hi EnzoBluebird,

Thanks. That's a nice improvement. There's enough 'air' I think.

Would you try different orientations of the words? I feel it may become easier to read once there is a order to the words.

And I don't particularly fall for the typography of the 2. Maybe you can play around with other typography for the number?

Looking forward to your posts!

Kind regards,

Rutger

#58 - a different '2' and slightly bolder 'Long' 'Touch'.

#62 - the idea here is that the white rectangle is a touch screen and the white square shapes are icons with the '2' representing someone moving between the icons and moving an icon.

Hi EnzoBluebird,

Sorry for not getting to respond in-depth on your last few logo's.

I see you didn't get into the last five spots. That means our paths separate. I just want thank you for your work. I've enjoyed your logo's. Unfortunately there can only be one winner in any given competition.
Keep up the good work and most importantly:

Capture the magic & Enjoy,

Rutger