Hi Concept One,
Your design is one of the five left.
Do you feel like exploring the outer rims of your winning design?
I like may of the elements:
The round orientation is great.
The finger and the 2 is ingenious
It's very recognisable
What I think may be improved:
The finger and the 2 are a bit hard to recognise what it is when on a small bottle. Maybe you can simplify it a bit?
The font is feminin, but common. Can you try this concept with a more styled 'design' font somewhat like my #3? It may colide with the roundness of the rest of the elements, but I'd like to see it.
There is a lot going on in the logo. I would lose whatever has no function: the two dots, the touch 'spatter' on the 2.
And if the finger were to really cut through the 2 instead of slice it on the edge of it, then it may become more clear from a distance then it is now. You'll have to probably move the words around bit though.
I'm curious if you can make it work. Is my feedback useful this time?
Kind regards,
Rutger