Hi Pam! Thanks so much for submitting your entries! I like where these are going - not sure if the floral swirly artwork is too structured or not for me. I'd love a more edgy look - something that I haven't been able to get from anyone else on here. I would love for 'linda' to be a thin, modern font and the 'mendenhall' a little bit thicker and no space between them. And then the artwork in the same position you've got it, just not so stylized. Does that make sense? I have a friend who did a look I love (obviously, I don't want to copy her, but this gives you an idea). Her site is restoringpower.com
If you have any questions, just let me know. Thanks so much!
Here's a revision based on your feedback. Let me know if I am headed in the right direction with this. I'd be happy to provide more revisions to get this where you want it. Thanks so much!