I really like the idea with the speech bubbles. Can you try a different font for the "socializer" so it's more like the one used for "live"? Also, try a different background other than black. Perhaps a color that goes with the blue? Orange? Silver? The "live" perhaps can use a bold font and the "socializer" not bold and lowercase.
Also, if the speech bubbles are a bit tilted with perspective, can you put the words with the same perspective?
Leave the speech bubbles on both words.
Finally, look at the icon used on the iphone camera and try to use just the lens for the O in "socializer". The camera icon you used seems old style in my mind. Thanks for your work.
Entry #10 is more like what I am looking for. I also like #9 but not sure yet about the colors. Please make these changes:
1. Try the speech balloons without rounded corners or with very very subtle rounded corners. 2. The camera icon should be the exact height of the letter O so it looks like part of the word. 3. Use a lighter font on the socializer. 4. Try with different fonts to compare. 5. Try Live and Socializer side to side to see how that looks. 6. On the side by side, try a balloon only on the live. 7. Use pastel colors on the balloons (light orange, light blue, light green, light red).
Hi, can you try more vibrant colors? It looks washed out. Also, try the make an monochrome icon of the camera. The black circle clashed too much with the rest. Maybe making it monochrome would make it better. Thanks!
#35 I like this one a lot, however the font on the socializer is not quite right. The letter z and letter e have very thin lines in comparison with others. Perhaps you can switch the font with something similar. Try to make the orange a little darker maybe, something with a little more contrast...
Also try it without the reflection. Maybe a flat to see what it looks like. Thanks!
#43 an you try more vibrant colors? It looks washed out. Also, try the make an monochrome icon of the camera. The black circle clashed too much with the rest. Maybe making it monochrome would make it better. Thanks!
Hi, it looks like #62 has still an O (the lens) slightly larger than it should be. Also, can you try different icon for the lens? See entry #75 for an idea of what I am talking about. He did it in monochrome and it looks like a lens to me (without the arrow pointing down). I also want you to try socializer in italics just to see what that looks like. Thanks!