Little LebanonLogo Design Contest

changes uploaded #175 - #180
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Hi Again. Can you also try one - changed the same as above, but with an overall difference in proportion, so that the words are smaller and the image is larger - say 20% change.

Hi. Can you try this one so that that the circle around the tree is a little more oval shaped like in #160. The tree itself looks good, we just want to try with a bigger background to the tree. Just to make the image part of the logo a little larger and not so round. Can you also modify the black lines on either side of Little, so that they are more defined. They look a little blurry the way they are right now.

changes uploaded #159, #160, #161
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Best regards,
Dalhaz

Hi Dalhazz. Can you please redo this logo (115) and also 114 and 113, but change the words Little Lebanon to be the same as the black from 154 with the two black lines from 154. Basically the bottom of 154 with the top of 113, 114 and 115. Many thanks.

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Dalhaz

Hi, sure... I can do that if you give me a chance. :)

Hi. These new ones look good, but I will have to sit with the others to discuss them. The only issue that I can see being raised is the tree - possibly the trunk is too long and narrow. I know it is only a small thing, but the cedar tree traditionally has that low and slightly spread out shape for the trunk, which is what people recognise instantly as the cedar tree. It is a little harder to work with, but it is an important part of the tree shape.

I hope you are patient, I am sure LT will follow up quickly on weekdays.
we as a designer will try as much as possible so that you get the perfect logo.

Best regards,
Dalhaz

I have out you back into 1st spot so you can review. I asked the Organisers to extend the review period and they have done nothing so I am actually very pissed off with them. They have changed the format from what it used to be and this is too short for proper feedback - especially when there are different designers in different parts of the world with different time zones. Likely this will be the last time that I use Logo Tournament or refer any clients here.

I am always open to all your revisions, the only thing is that your contest is now in Selection mode and only the Finalist designer can submit logos. I can only submit if you put me temporarily to the top spot. Thank you.

This one was good as well, but the thought was that the coffee cup limits what we are - it is more than just coffee. Having looked at it again a little closer and in a little bigger version, the cup is actually a bowl (I think), but the same issue arises - the smaller version looked like a coffee cup. I understand that the 3 pronged red image is a fork, but that also gets lost in the smaller size version. Very clever images, but for the smart phone sized version, those things will get lost.

This looks good, but the view is that the tree looks too much like some sort of environmental group. We may need to work on the other one.

Hi. This one is good, but the tree seems to get a little lost - people may not be able to work out what it is. Can you possibly modify the fork and knife and have the tree a bit smaller so that more of its shape is involved. Try some black in there as well - it needs something to break up the red and green which starts to look too much like Christmas.

Hi. This one is liked, but it feels too much like a postage stamp style and the words still play a major part of the logo. While we need them to be there, we want to be able to detach the words from the logo image and still have it recognised (Nike style as the extreme example). What about a change to bring the Little Lebanon underneath the image and straighten it up and maybe cut the bottom scoop of the image to allow that and play with the red and green lines to make it something different. The cedar tree is an essential thing, the Little Lebanon we need, but they can be outside the graphic part of the logo, but possibly even some sort of classy style chef's hat or something food linked, but not too old fashioned as a background to the tree. While red, green and white are the preferred colours (due to the flag) black can be used for lettering or even other things as well to break up the Christmas tree effect. Hope fully that helps a bit.

with some combination of red-green color... #45, #46, #47

Hi. Maybe try this one with the colours of the ring changed. The top outside ring changed to green, the bottom outside ring changed to green and the bottom inside ring changed to red. Like you had the colours in the first example, but reversed to suit the change.

Changes uploaded #41-#44

Hi. With this one, can you do it exactly the same shape etc, but have the word Lebanon in red and the word little in green and try one with the tree in green and one with the tree in red. Maybe the different colour tree to the word will look bad, but I would like to see it.

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Best Regards,
Dalhaz

Hi. Can you try this one with different colours. Lebanon in red and Little in green, maybe try the tree with both green and red.

changes uploaded.
let me know if you need another revision.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

I quite like this, but not sure if the Little is too little.