I love the patch concept. I can see this extending to needing to find an embroiderer. This is going to be very difficult. I might need to figure out how to do multiple winners
I will submit these to the board and narrow down in the upcoming week. No additional feedback at this time.
Hello :) I have made the revision with the patch lines, it is much better now. I have added the LHYA in three new entries. And also i've tried to make bushes..just to build the natural hills nuance.
If you have something to ask me, feel free to let me know..
I like the changes. The yellow/gold in the center is perfect. Technically red would come in the next ring but that wouldn't look very good. I like the way it is with the blue and the red in the ribbon area. We don't really care for the leaves on the sides but the dots add a nice touch. I think that is the only thing we would add.
Not a big deal, but is there anywhere we could add St. Charles, MO? Looks like it would have to be on the outside somewhere. Might make it too wordy. Just a thought.
It is looking really good. Hard to decide on the placement of St. Charles. I couldn't imagine before you did it and you made it look great! However, I do need to have the ", MO" too. We have another St. Charles right next door (state) in St. Charles, IL.
We will also need to work on some form issues with your archer guy but hopefully small tweaks. I am more focused on the design elements right now. Eventually, we need the sight in better alignment. It is too high. The hand also needs to be up by the jaw line. I would also lose the broad arrow point. Field tips actually just taper off abruptly.
I like the way you slightly lowered the elbow on each iteration. Good idea. I will submit this to the coaches on Saturday and see who is the first to spot the attention to form. This will earn points in their book. :) I'll let you know Saturday if there are any additional tweaks needed.
Thanks for all of your work. The coaches got a kick out of the elbow lowering effect in still frames. :) Your imagery masterfully captured the feeling of traditional outdoor archery or even hunting. While this design was very nice and conveyed the patch concept that I was looking for, the coaches had a hard time translating it to the general theme we were looking for.