The colors can always be adjusted. Thanks for your submissions entry numbers #18 and #19 are the best out these concepts. It does feel like in these two entries that you stubbed the "L". the bottom loop feels disproportional to the top loop. Other than that two very clean submission. Clean up the "L" in those two. I see you took my feather thought literally, we we're hoping to see some out of the box idea's that we have not considered. I look to you for inspiration, perhaps a play on the "n" and"u" as they are essentially opposites (upside-down) or way to isolate "Up" in different way.
Entry #20 and #21 are very well executed. Very simple and clean. we really like these new submission. we are debating which font looks better. could you please also incorporate the "health and weight loss management" also we are working on a slogan "eat right, live lite" if you could refine those entries and feel free to submit any new concepts we really do like your work.
Entry #23 is a bit hard to make out. I know what it is but I ran it by some people in the office and they could not understand that it was a butterfly.
Thanks! =) refined entries uploaded(i've incorporated the "health and weight loss management" too) ...hopefully some more new concepts very soon. Have a nice day!!!
Entry #18 and #19 are still considerations, we like the concept but the letter "L" has to be fixed. the bottom loop looks disproportional. we still are in favor of entry #45 but as you are ware we've extended the contest in hopes to find a new concept. We love the butterfly concept because it instills alot of symbolism's that we like. Butter fly changes through life, and stages of its life. turns into something beautiful. We are treating individuals with health concerns due to their weight, we chose the word lite because it is a play on weight. Alot of marketing today uses the word "lite" in reference to beverages, food (low calories) to software and versions (lite programs) even services. we were really hoping to get a concept that instills light weight. hence the suggestion of incorporating the feather. We look to designers to push the envelop and think out of the box. we really do look forward to new submissions.
on #41 and #42 I tried to balance the loop... I'll make some more adjustments to the letter "L" and upload it today =) ...oh and I'll do my best to think of something new too. thanks!
thanks for adjusting the logo as requested. note entry #70 does not fit with the feather. could you submit entry #44 with different a green and blue color scheme. thank you