I incorporated the stables at your facility, using these two elements together makes the logo a lot more original. and also makes a more lasting impression on the viewer as this gives them something other than the horse to remember.
Thank you for taking the time to look at the facility page.
The target audience expects to see horses and art/adverts that depict horse in a more actual and elegant way. The gate effect is original, but not the most elegant part of the stables or lifestyle
Font style needs to be more traditional but not script. See other top ranked subs.
color needs to be more khaki/tan than gold. Or stick with blk/whte/gray
If you are using equine clipart...look for horses that jump with the bent knees up by the horses chin. This is considered good jumping form on a competition horse and important to the highly educated clientele and insiders of this business.
My perspective clients will want to know that I know the difference between a talented horse and a not so talented horse. Also it just more pleasing to the eye.
#67 is my favorite of your group...for its simplicity. All are good though.
Thanks again, points taken, i will try to improve on these. i also stay away from clipart as this i likely to get you into copyright trouble as well as it takes away from the originality and uniqueness of the work.
#142 i have added a rider to the horse, instead of using a solid color for the horse i used a semi circular shape at the baser o the composition, to imply that the horse is there, this also also makes the logo more interesting and original setting it apart from other logos withe horses jumping.