I like what you have done with #10. I have thinking about ways to "soften" it. What would you think about replacing the radiating lines (off the "brain") with radiating semi-circles, a little bit like a wireless signal or a volume indicator? By that I mean lines that get bigger as they go farther away, or perhaps the reverse. Or perhaps multiple curved lines. These are just ideas to stay with your general theme, but get a more curved effect instead of the straight lines. I like the way you have a kept a brain in the picture, and the concept of radiating away from the brain.
Thanks for your responsiveness! The new designs help me see that I want to move away from the brain shape you have been using. Could you use more of a head or profile outline, but keep the "brainwaves" and the radiating waves? See how it looks to have two sets of radiating waves, from each side perhaps. I like some of the new ideas that showed up yesterday from other designers, so you could think about what image inside a head, with or without the brainwaves, do you think would go well with the radiating waves moving away from the head. Again, I really appreciate your work.
Wow! Quick response; thank you. This is very interesting, both for the figure, and the way you left out the tag line. I am pondering on whether or not the tag line really adds to the logo. One thought: can you play around with the angle of the figure in the circle? Do you think the leaning figure creates a "thinking" pose or a "sad" pose? What would straight up look like? What about the colors behind? Is there a way to still get sufficient contrast but have something other than white as the backdrop? Thanks.
Ok, I can say that a logo, should work good, on black and white, should also work in portrait and landscape mode, and also should work with and without the slogan.
I think that my 3rd or 4th, submission was my best, as it was simple and clean.
It's very difficult to maintain the medical feeling of the logo with the success, achievement, progress as the main thing of it, as will look like a stock market, financial, company.
I've tried my best with my #77 to keep the healthcare/medical feeling....