i have tweaked this design,
please review on entry #128#129
and also, this design have shadow below the fire,
please let me know what do you think about that
This flame is beautiful and it's the same from your other design but you flipped negative space, and it has amazing dimension that the other version doesn't. The only challenge I have in this layout is that 'Life of' is small and the focus is Fire. Seeing your other design I love how LIFE OF FIRE are all the same emphasis. I'm torn bc I love this stacked layout a lot!
I <3 your flame the most. It's contained but still wild. I do love that you tried out blue w/ the red. I want to sit with this color combo. Could you also explain the font in Fire (with the knocked out letters)? Could we make them normal?
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please check my new revision,
I simplify the fire a little bit
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sorry about that.
its my habit to call like that
sure ma'am ,
please let me know if you need anything to tweak
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please review on entry #128 #129
and also, this design have shadow below the fire,
please let me know what do you think about that
best regards
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#128 #129
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please let me know sir
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word in same weight
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adding line between second word
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normal E and F
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please let me know sir
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please let me know if you need anything to tweak
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thank you
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