Dotwoman, I love the colors, the font, and the emphasis on the word :writing." The graphic design is a little busy -- could you focus on the top of the quill, rather than the feathers? The scales are a nice touch, but I don't like the frills and flourishes as much as the clean designs in the samples I provided, Thanks! I like these a lot!
Dotwoman, Thanks for posting designs 7 and 8! I love the colors, the font, and the emphasis on the word :writing." The graphic design is a little busy -- could you focus on the top of the quill, rather than the feathers? The scales are a nice touch, but I don't like the frills and flourishes as much as the clean designs in the samples I provided, Thanks! I like these a lot!
Thank you so much for the great feedback. I have submitted modified designs for your perusal and will be happy to make any additional changes you wih to see. Karen
I really, really like the modified quill in entry 14!! It's so clean and simple. And I think I like the green and grey better than the purple, after seeing them both.
Could you submit one with a very, teeny, tiny bit darker grey color for the lettering? This might be just a little bit too light.
I think I like the darker grey color in #16 better! I'm going to get some feedback from some other people, but I think it pops a bit more with the darker letters. I don't want it to blend in with black ink, so I don't want to go too dark... I'll let you know what feedback I get! Thank you!
In the circle, where the quill is, the quill isn't entirely discernible. From a distance, the graphic sort of looks like a circle with a line through it until you look at it closely. Can you make a bit of the tip open so that some white space shows through, like in entry #10, and make the tip of the quill a bit larger inside the circle -- almost zoom in on the tip of the quill a bit (which means the shaft of the quill will be a bit shorter) to make the graphic a bit more identifiable?