1. i'm try change head of rocket like roof, body more slim, and window.. for the door i'm not sure because the door concept the other designer.. maybe if i'm win i can add the door in rocket
2. i'm try make different smoke for alternatives.. hope you love it :)
Hi, thanks for your logo submissions. This one is cool. Could we explore a few options:
1. Make the house-rocket look a bit more streamlined / aerodynamic, but also convey that it is meant to look like a house - perhaps a door.
2. Could we try having a straight-edge along the bottom of the black, but keeping the rounded-sides.
3. The exhaust trail makes the City look a bit smoggy. Could the field of the trail be narrowed.
4. Could we try with the word "PROPERTIES" in the black.
Hi there, like this a lot, but would be cool to see the rocket styled ever-so slightly more like a house. Would be good to see what the cityscape looked like with a few yellow squares as windows.
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1. i'm try change head of rocket like roof, body more slim, and window.. for the door i'm not sure because the door concept the other designer.. maybe if i'm win i can add the door in rocket
2. i'm try make different smoke for alternatives.. hope you love it :)
if there any improvement again please let me know
thank you
Hampura
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1. Make the house-rocket look a bit more streamlined / aerodynamic, but also convey that it is meant to look like a house - perhaps a door.
2. Could we try having a straight-edge along the bottom of the black, but keeping the rounded-sides.
3. The exhaust trail makes the City look a bit smoggy. Could the field of the trail be narrowed.
4. Could we try with the word "PROPERTIES" in the black.
Thanks very much for your designs to date.
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