Thank you very much for submitting - great work! A couple of reactions:
1. I like the contrast of the NY in entry #1 over entry #2. 2. The widget on entry #2 is better... while I like the creative shape of #1, the downward motion is a bit off. I also like the progression in the widget in entry #2, with the small blocks progressing to the bigger one and the arrow. 3. The font on Launch is a bit too mod - particularly the 'a' missing the little bit on the end.
#3 combines what I think are the best of your submissions so far - great work! One thing that is a little odd, perhaps, is the fact that the shapes on the ends mirror each other in size and shape. Is that a good thing, design-wise? I like the way the green block and white letters puts the NY in contrast. Are there other ways to vary up the shapes a bit?
Hey, thanks for the updates! I have #3 ranked ahead of #15 but I am really not sure and will be asking other folks on the team... #15 is obviously a bit more simple without the widget on the left but I really like how you were able to include the block elements on #15 with the NY. Unfortunately the one thing it doesn't do as well as #3 is imply a build... going from small blocks to a big one reading from left to right helps establish the kind of growth that we would like to represent... bringing component parts into a more valuable whole. I don't know if there's a way to use the design of #15 put somehow visually put those small blocks more into the background, so that the movement rather than coming from left to right is more visually back to front?
Regardless, we really appreciate your responsiveness and have really liked what you've contributed here. Thank you so much!