Entry 14- we would like to see this one with the following changes-
1) please emphasize Depth not Laser with the color 2) maybe a larger laser sparkle 3) we had a concern about what looks like a 90 degree bend in a laser beam... doesn't make sense. Can you think of a change whereby the laser sparkle and the beam that leads into it, are separate visually from the vertical white line?
1) ensure the laser beam is vertical - it looks tilted to one side 2) ensure the same color of orange is used - text looks like a different color 3) place a larger laser burst - maybe 50% larger - large enought to be clear on a business card.