Thank you for the submission. This is a good start, but I must say is a little plain. We like the idea with the pins, but we need more to it. We are looking for something more complex and colorfull.
Thank you again for your time, and we hope to see more submissions from you.
I do not think we are going in the right direction with these. The map idea is good, but still a little plain. I do not like the photo style image blended with graphic art. I think the logo needs to be all graphic art. Not to mention that I am not to sure how happy Google would be with us using a screenshot portion of their map with no reference back to them.