I like entry #23 a little more, but can you some Color in the background?, maybe like a dirty orange/ Teracota? Also, can you change the font to a Mission style font? I saw a mission style font when I google "Mission Style fonts"
I like both entries, however I think Entry # 23 san use some color in the background?, remember....., this is for a sign and building geared towards Spanish/ Mediterranean style...., give it something appealing to the Eye to make you want to stay there...
In addition, change the font in Upper class letters for "Lamplighter" into a Mission style font. Visit "Myfonts.com" and search for "Missions style" fonts so you'll know what I'm talking about